Get feedback on a pitch or speech from Telegram

Whenever a message arrives in your Telegram chat, the workflow treats it as a draft, a pitch, a talk or a difficult email, and replies in the same chat with feedback on it. You tell it once what you are preparing and who it is for, since the same paragraph reads differently in a conference talk and in a note to a client.

The reply comes back under five fixed headings: the opening, the structure, the wording and clarity, the ending and the ask, and three specific things to change. The AI is told to describe the draft in front of it, quoting your own words so you can find the passage, and not to predict how it will land, score it, compare it or rewrite it, and every reply ends by saying so. A short message is treated as chat rather than a draft and gets a note asking for the whole thing. Long drafts and long replies are trimmed so the answer always fits one Telegram message.

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TelegramWhen a new message is received. Save it as incomingMessage.When a new message is received. Save it as incomingMessage.

Set deliveryContext to blank.Set deliveryContext to blank.

Set minimumDraftLength to 120.Set minimumDraftLength to 120.

Set chatId to incomingMessage.chat_id.Set chatId to incomingMessage.chat_id.

If chatId is emptyIf chatId is empty

Yes

Stop and report a problem: That message did not say which chat it came from, so there was nowhere to reply.Stop and report a problem: That message did not say which chat it came from, so there was nowhere to reply.

No

No steps

Set draftText to blank.Set draftText to blank.

If a step below fails, save the error as messageErrorIf a step below fails, save the error as messageError

Try

Trim incomingMessage.text and save it as draftText.Trim incomingMessage.text and save it as draftText.

On error

Finish the run: That message had no text in it, so there was no draft to read.Finish the run: That message had no text in it, so there was no draft to read.

If draftText starts with Feedback on your draftIf draftText starts with Feedback on your draft

Yes

Finish the run: That message was feedback this workflow already sent, so it was left alone.Finish the run: That message was feedback this workflow already sent, so it was left alone.

No

No steps

Set draftFloor to minimumDraftLength multiplied by 1.Set draftFloor to minimumDraftLength multiplied by 1.

If the length of draftText is less than draftFloorIf the length of draftText is less than draftFloor

Yes

TelegramSend a message to chat chatId.Send a message to chat chatId.Send me the whole draft and I will go through it. That message was too short to give useful feedback on.

Finish the run: The message was shorter than the draft floor, so no feedback was written.Finish the run: The message was shorter than the draft floor, so no feedback was written.

No

No steps

Shorten draftText to 6000 characters (keeping words whole) and save it as cappedDraft.Shorten draftText to 6000 characters (keeping words whole) and save it as cappedDraft.

Set promptRole to Someone has sent you their own draft and asked what you make of it. Give them delivery feedback on it.Set promptRole to Someone has sent you their own draft and asked what you make of it. Give them delivery feedback on it. What they are preparing: deliveryContext .

Set promptRules to Rules you must follow:Set promptRules to Rules you must follow: - Describe the draft in front of you. Do not predict how an audience will react to it, how it will land, or whether it will work. - Do not score, rate or grade it, and do not compare it to other people's drafts. - Quote the draft's own words when you point at something, so they can find it.

Set promptRulesTwo to - Say what already works before what to change.Set promptRulesTwo to - Say what already works before what to change. - Comment on this draft only. Do not rewrite it for them. - Plain text, no formatting marks, under 400 words.

Set promptSections to Use exactly these five headings, in this order, each on its own line:Set promptSections to Use exactly these five headings, in this order, each on its own line: Opening Structure Wording and clarity Ending and the ask Three things to change .

Set feedbackPrompt to promptRole@promptRules@promptRulesTwo@promptSectionsTheir draft:Set feedbackPrompt to promptRole@promptRules@promptRulesTwo@promptSectionsTheir draft: cappedDraft .

Set modelResult to nothing.Set modelResult to nothing.

If a step below fails, save the error as modelCallErrorIf a step below fails, save the error as modelCallError

Try

OpenAIAsk OpenAI: feedbackPrompt. Save it as modelResult.Ask OpenAI: feedbackPrompt. Save it as modelResult.

On error

Change modelResult to nothing.Change modelResult to nothing.

Set feedbackText to blank.Set feedbackText to blank.

If a step below fails, save the error as feedbackErrorIf a step below fails, save the error as feedbackError

Try

Trim modelResult.response_text and save it as feedbackText.Trim modelResult.response_text and save it as feedbackText.

On error

Change feedbackText to blank.Change feedbackText to blank.

If feedbackText is emptyIf feedbackText is empty

Yes

TelegramSend a message to chat chatId.Send a message to chat chatId.I read your draft but could not write the feedback this time. Send it again and I will have another go.

Finish the run: The model returned nothing, so no feedback was written.Finish the run: The model returned nothing, so no feedback was written.

No

No steps

Set replyHead to Feedback on your draftSet replyHead to Feedback on your draft .

Shorten feedbackText to 3400 characters (keeping words whole) and save it as replyBody.Shorten feedbackText to 3400 characters (keeping words whole) and save it as replyBody.

Set replyFoot to Set replyFoot to This describes the draft as it is written. It is not a prediction of how it will land or how anyone will react.

Set replyText to replyHead plus replyBody plus replyFoot.Set replyText to replyHead plus replyBody plus replyFoot.

TelegramSend a message to chat chatId.Send a message to chat chatId.replyText

Finish the run: Feedback on the draft was sent back to the chat it came from.Finish the run: Feedback on the draft was sent back to the chat it came from.